5 Final Pieces

This is my final copy of my main product contents page.

This is my final copy of my main product middle page spread.

This is my final copy of my main product front cover.

This is my final copy of my preliminary contents page.

This is my final copy of my preliminary front cover

Third Attempt At Contents Page

This is my third attempt of my contents page. I took the comments from my latest focus group and they agreed that the simpler colour scheme was a simple yet effective improvement and they said that the change of images at the bottom of the page was a lot better.

Third Attempt At Middle Page Spread

This is my third attempt at my middle page spread. I have again made fairly small changes from my second draft, such as putting one of the pictures into a frame and moving it to another location on the page. I also edited the contrast and brightness of a photo to help improve it as it was admittedly a rather poor quality photo.

Third Attempt At Front Cover

This is my third attempt at my front cover. I have only made minor changes from my second draft, and they were alterations like changing the size of some font or unhighlighting the feature writing. I feel that these small changes make a worthy difference and this draft was a way of almost finalising any little mistakes.

Second Attempt At Contents

This is my second draft of my contents page. I tried to take the comments from my focus group that the orignal draft didnt flow and looked messy and tried to keep to a simpler design with similar colour scheme but with slight changes.

Afterwards I asked another focus group what their thoughts of the hopefully improved contents page and they said that they thought it was fairly good although I had used one of the same images from my middle page spread which they thought could be changed and improved and they also commented that my image in the bottom lefthand corner of the page was poor quality and desperately needed changing or editing.