This is my second draft of my contents page. I tried to take the comments from my focus group that the orignal draft didnt flow and looked messy and tried to keep to a simpler design with similar colour scheme but with slight changes.
Afterwards I asked another focus group what their thoughts of the hopefully improved contents page and they said that they thought it was fairly good although I had used one of the same images from my middle page spread which they thought could be changed and improved and they also commented that my image in the bottom lefthand corner of the page was poor quality and desperately needed changing or editing.
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